Cameron:

Lipsynch needs a lot of work. Character movement is a little too exaggerated on right character.

Kevin McCullough:

characters are just always moving, needs some holds for the gestures to work. You have some nice poses in there but overall they just blur together

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

To me, i feel some of the animations are floaty

Janice Liu:

I think timing would help the animation cause you have nice poses but needs more refinement

Blond:

Timings needs more work.

Craig P. Smith:

The poses are all over the place. They are exaggerated, which is okay, but they don't seem natural or believable. Your poses are based on poses, not on acting choices.

April Slocombe:

The bald guy's arm bend at frame 83 looks a bit unnatural while some of the movements are a bit floaty and choppy. Good lip sync otherwise.