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Mythology and Plants

by Ng Qi Zhe

Final Rating: 5.75. Finished 22 out of 79 entries.

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Animator: Ng Qi Zhe

Description: The brothers are discussing Mythology and Plants at the museum

Experience: Student

Time taken: 2.5 week

Comments:

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Vicent Matoses:

very good work

Max:

It’s a good start. I like the idea of the first chatter pacing at 120. And there’s some nice anticipation at 257 but it happens too late, in in option. I think the thing that’s hurting you most is the timing in general. The characters move just a bit too slow and it makes them appear late to the action and disconnected from the audio. I think with a few more passes in the body and especially face, it could be really strong!

Alejandro Martinez:

The action when he is in thought while hitting his hand on his palm is a little to long, acting it out doesn't feel natural. great animation!