Leah M:

First off. Wow great job with this Both characters!

There are some really strong moments of emotion I want to point out. The shrug, looking down and the slight adjustment in his mouth. And the girl in the background really fits as a response. The lighting is nice for the scene as well. You can see the closeness shown between these characters the moment she reaches out was a nice addition.

I think the only thing that was a bit off was the end. The girl in the backs smile was nice actually but the character at the front felt a bit harsh or perhaps too exaggerated but in my opinion.

Overall this is really dang good you should be proud!

Kevin C. Burke:

The staging is excellent. The lip-sync never goes with the audio, unfortunately.

Richard Adams:

One of the best entries this month. Possible winner.

Sam Larson:

I'm liking a lot of the character acting choices you've made here. I think some of the month shapes are a bit harsh and could be relaxed to get a better result.

Pablo García:

buena tula