'A venture into space station.' from the July Competition

A venture into space station.

by JP

Final Rating: 6.52. Finished 9 out of 103 entries.

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Animator: JP

Description: A crew member ventures into an abandoned space station while the pilot in mother ship is warned about approaching objects towards it.

Experience: Couple of years

Time taken: Around 10 days

Comments:

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Henry Barbee:

Well done! Could be a bit snappier though, i think it’s a little floaty. Also, maybe try to push the facial expressions to a little more extreme at times. Overall they’re a little bland I feel. With a little more polish though, this could be a great shot!

Ian Hakes:

Great quality render and animation. Lip sync is lined up well and the set does not distract from what is going on. I would suggest making the warning a bit larger and maybe casing light on her face if possible. But really that is my only critique I can offer.

Richard Adams:

Love the subtlety and nuance of movement here. Beautifully lit and rendered. Top 10 IMO.

MarutiYemul:

Nice Render... lady looks beautiful nice suttle Acting.. but need some tighten the actions.. now its looks little floaty.. Great job..