Robert Zhou:

I was confused by the cut to the principal at 170. I wasn't sure where his desk relates to the previous shot. But the animation was good :)

Nathan Greensmith:

Great animation, good narrative, nice style, nicely done.

Ben Halstead:

This is definitely ambitious... The posing is quite good. I would work on your character drawing as there's a lot of line-wobble and inconsistencies that appear over time. Also the two men look very similar to each other. I'm always glad to see frame by frame work though!

Bruno de Coninck:

Good work! Just needs a bit of plishing and ading some folow throught and overlaps and I think it will be very good!

Paula Decanini:

The pose at frame 140 is awkward. He pops down to put his hands on his knees, then pops right back up, with not enough weight and settling. His back is curved convexly which looks uncomfortable.

Kyle Novak:

Pretty good, lacking some fundamentals, the movement was decent. Id like to see what you would do with more than a month. Not the most interesting concept.