Comments:
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Zoe Piel:
Kind of cartoony, overly bouncy and zippy, which doesn't fit the dialogue that well.
Michael Bradshaw:
Good Job!
Scott:
There are some nice subtle gestures on her. The lip sync could use a bit more work.
Brad Bradbury:
Great stuff.
I think they need to blink more.
I would have him blink around 195ish
as he contemplates her hand.
I would have her blink around 290 after 'it' (between phrases).
His Left hand doesn't feel tucked in enough at the end.
Watch her lip sync for 'check' I think you are missing the 'k'.
I would also adjust her 's' sound at the end.
Her double take happens twice,
and because of this it takes away the impact of them.
I would keep the first one, when he interrupts her drinking at 60.
The double rotate y around fr 240 is too much, in my opinion.
Luke Coleman:
Good weight shifting, expressions and micro gestures. However the lip sync seems to be a little off.
Vin Liew:
overall not bad, need more work on lipsync
Sergio Montenegro:
Great acting! the lipsync kinda needs more work
Animator: Tai Beaumont
Description: An unrealistically optimistic man tries to hit on his ex wife at a dinner party, only to be given the cold shoulder.
Experience: A few years.
Time taken: 29 hours (tracked hours accurately this month)