Lucio Mennillo:

WAY too much camera movement!!!!!

Marianna Farris:

I found the movement distracting. I think you might have overdone it a bit maybe

Floyd:

camera movement is overwhelming, the number of gestures and positions in such a short amount of time makes things feel rushed.

Rosario Salvatore:

i like the moves and poses but I think it falls short with the camera work

ben malberg:

I can see you spent some time on this. I think it needs a lot more polish but the overall movement feels pretty good and I like how you staged her to move through the house. The face animation needs work.

Jez:

Your camera moves are a bit confusing. I'm not sure if they are really necessary. I'd need to watch your clip a couple times to determine that. I think your animation (which is good) would show even better with less camera moves.

Moby:

Camera moves a little too much. Reducing the close-then-far-then-quickly-close-again would improve the shot.