Comments:
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Cody Cessna:
Watch where the character is looking. The man’s eyes move in ways that don’t make sense or convey emotion.
Raul Soria:
More work on the 12 principles. Characters oddly move and twitch a little.
Inacio:
some poses could use some improvement, but it looks creative
Alyssa FitzGerald:
The guy is jittery and the girl is stiff, especially in her hands. The lip sync is also needing work.
Spencer Bentley:
Needs a lot of work, but compared to some others, there's at least some animation here. Keep on animating though, practice makes perfect!
Animator: Justin
Description: Loa is contemplating why she has upset one of her friends while Henry tries to calm her down while being slightly annoyed at the situation.
Experience: 2 year
Time taken: 2 weeks