Comments:
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Darren Evander:
camera movement is misleading
Sheetal:
Lighting of the environment is low, not able to see the expressions and too much camera movement.
Catalina Montelongo:
I feel like the camera angles/movement distracted a little from your animation
Richard Felix B. Candia:
too much camera movement is quite distracting. You could really improve if you make the composition a lot better too.
Inacio:
it is too dark to know what she is saying, and the camera is moving, as well as the last character is stiff and unclear
Alyssa FitzGerald:
The camera work is distracting.
Aniela Bogusz:
A more fixed and smooth camera would help
Trevor Finney:
Seems like your animation is on the right track but the camera movement is very distracting. Try framing your shots with a static camera.
Animator: ajax
Description: Just a average conversation to her self talking to good and evil to see if her question is good or bad, is it bad or good?
Experience: I am a student of YHS who is in a second year of 3d arts
Time taken: The whole month