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What is wrong with you?

by Saniya Pawar

Final Rating: 3.39. Finished 174 out of 231 entries.

506 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Saniya Pawar

Description: This is my first animation.

Experience: None

Time taken: 9 Days

Comments:

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Adrian Winchell:

The poses could be quite a bit stronger in the long shot, and I was afraid you weren't going to move anything when I was watching the closeups. Not sure what you're animating this in, but could use some more facial angle movement during the actions, especially the closeups.

S J Bennett:

Love the hand on the shoulder at the end. Aww. :)

Joep de Laat:

I get what you're trying to say, but to be straight forward, your animation just needs work. But with practice and time you'll get there ;)

Vittorio:

i like the last movement of the giraffe