Alice Reeve:

I like the way he just tosses the plate over his shoulder haha. Good use of hand gestures as well. But try working on making the characters' movements more fluid; they look a bit stiff and robotic.

Adrian Winchell:

That plate defies common sense AND physics. o3o

Léo Miche:

This is too big of a challenge for the moment. Maybe try to nail some simpler exercises before doing 2 characters-10-seconds acting shot.

S J Bennett:

The bald guy was unexpectedly balletic...

Joep de Laat:

the movements are really blocky which makes it hilarious but I don't think it was intended that way, and the last shot the man does not have eye contact while he goes to sit near the guy ( for easier conversation) but this makes him look blind.

Dan:

I liked the hop onto the couch

James Hornby:

a way you could improve would be to make sure the eye lines of the characters is definitely on or at least very near to the person their talking to. Otherwise it becomes unclear who is talking to who

Yanick Belanger:

The staging is nice ! From there, it is just a matter of polishing the curves and clearing the poses so they read better. On the good track !