Comments:
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Sarah Dunn:
There are still a few pops but this is a very good animation considering the amount of time you had
Lee:
Great job!
Satya:
nice... needs more work on the exageration
Derek Stewart:
Nice use of the audio with the papers! There's a bit too much happening in the shot overall, though. Keep the drill sergeant in there and remove the head slam.
April Slocombe:
Movements could do with more inbetweens otherwise the poses, lip sync and facial expressions are good. It's very funny when Bill's head falls onto the table.
Animator: Jaron Jackson
Description: Sargent checking in on a private.
Experience: 2 Years
Time taken: 3 Weeks, total of about 22 hours