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Deer In the Headlights

by Jess Kelly

Final Rating: 3.71. Finished 89 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Jess Kelly

Description: A couple in their new home debate how they look in a photo of themselves, which they have just was hung on their living room wall.

Experience: A little

Time taken: 17 days

Comments:

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Ben Zingo:

more light in the scene would help us to see the characters better, and actions feel sudden, and jerky. Make sure you're easing/using splines, and think about the timing of actions