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Graduation flash!

by Andy

Final Rating: 5.15. Finished 44 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Andy

Description: Olive gets scared by the flash in the middle of the moment of her photo graduation session.

Experience: Student

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Ben Zingo:

make sure you add some anticipation, overshoot, etc.
A lot of the head movements feel stiff and jerky

Leonardo Rivera:

Story didn’t make sense cause there was no picture of the photographer. Felt like a lot of unnecessary twinning with the arms throughout as well which took me out of it. I like your idea though, and the boy is well done