Jerry Lau:

Overall the animation was great. The weights are good.

Just little things, there may seem a lack of move movement or offset of the elf's chest, it seems not connected with other body parts. Also, the elf legs is shaking stronger and stronger before the girl throw him up.

The other was fine, good work!!

Juan:

work on the staging and performance,
Add more In-Betweens and Slow in and outs. More Animation fundamentals needed