Comments:
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Amol Wagh:
Use close ups and long shots in the combination. Needs a lot of work on timing and facial expressions.
J.K. Riki:
You've got some good poses, and this is a nice start. Where it's going wrong, I think, is you're too tense. Things are stiff, and I think it might be because you're trying so hard to make it "right." Keep it looser. Relax. Enjoy the early going. Get flow in there. THEN build your shapes and forms on top, that way you aren't moving stiff bones, you're allowing the characters to live and breathe. Good luck, and keep at it! There's a lot of nice things going on here, so I hope you'll try again this next month. :)
Animator: Jecinda Lomond
Description: Took "I don't need to Settle down" by a different approach. By the time I realized what the actual intent of the line was, I was already too invested. lol
hope it makes you all laugh as much as it did for me.
Cheers,
Jecinda
Experience: A recently graduated animator
Time taken: Roughly 2 Weeks