Comments:
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Nathaniel Vaughan:
That plane went by a little quick, didn't it?
VINCENT Nathan:
the idea is interesting but the staging can be a little better excpet this good job
Ryan Williams:
Poses are good. Timing is a little out of sync with the acting.
Sourabh Choudhary:
learn to driven story.
Lia Rothschild:
A little floaty and the intense focus on the iPad doesn't feel like it matches the tone of voice in the clip. The shutting of the iPad cover is a really nice movement though
Animator: Ng Wei Cheng
Description: The Character plans to go again to the sparrow lake, because it was the memory when he was a child; Also, compare with the childhood, the technology has advancement, he also laments about it.
Experience: 2 years student
Time taken: 2 weeks