Comments:
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Jonathan Fontaine:
About camera, you can just cut the camera and not move it that fast, as long as you respect the 180degree rule you should be good to go
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Oops, audio cut out, lot of off-synch and stilted animations... I don't think it's ready.
Frans Sjoberg:
Love it!
Kyra Simone:
This is not finished, so I'm assuming you're looking for a crit on the framing. I think the first shot is framed ok, but it shoots away from the shot at 218 wayyy too fast. Use reference for lip sync, and plan out your shots in a storyboard or at least thumbnails before you execute them. Good luck!
Tim Kamara:
lipsync needs more work!
Animator: Mourya
Description: This is my new experience to perform in a competition project of animation. i have faced lot of issues like animating body movements and face expressions and taken most of the time for lip sync.From this i would learn to improve my animation skills.
Experience: Newly experiencing the Animation
Time taken: 7 days