Karl Bernhardt:

The animation (from what I can see) Isn't so bad, but dude... what is this camera angle and quality? It looks as though you've created the set yourself and so have chosen a wide angle to show it off, but you should be at-least at a medium shot so we can see the characters. Also looks as though you've screen captured your view port, look into batch rendering

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:

Good, maybe focus on staging a bit more as it will be convenient for the audience to understand the actions. An also too many movements again and again. Separate them and show them part by part.

Hailee Pullman:

Great animation but I wish you pulled the camera in more.

Jasmine Moody:

Camera angle wasnt suited for the scene.