Vanessa Gonzalez:

I think overall the animation is good but the lip sync doesn't match that well. His lips don't seem to be moving too much and they start moving before you hear the voice. It you plan on refining this animation, I would focus mainly on the lip sync.

Jez:

yeah I always "liked" those dark almost no lighting 3d animation scenes. They "show" a lot ... wish you placed more light...coz your animation might be quite interesting if i saw more of it

Jasmine Moody:

I think there could have been a /little/ more animation. The black and white filter made it harder for me to see his mouth moving (it's already so tiny). Pose is nice.

Liviu Boar:

too bad about the lip sync...

Richard Clark:

Overall I think you could finesse the motion a bit more. Everything seems to be hitting a wall. I like to see more of a change in the body through the piece as well.

Ryan D Lowe:

Watch for those walls. The head stops cold on F66

Amartya Mukherji:

wow.. that has got some punch in it... Superb animation.

audio is offset brother.. rectify it. :(

Danny Kneip:

Interesting character design and composition overall, but the lip sync is poorly timed here. The hand gestures are good, though he missed the ash try by about a foot. Nitpicking now - the vignette seems to expand as the animation goes along (only noticeable during scrubbing). A good entry, nonetheless.