Aaron Clement:

Needs to keep the mouth closed more on the consonants (enunciate more). Better is in colour. Needs more body mechanics... has potential!

Amartya Mukherji:

could have been much better.

Ryan D Lowe:

This needs more holds in certain places, especially in the accents as the character thinks through the dialogue.

Richard Clark:

Lip sync is off. Should work on refining it and the timing. Plus, it would be a good idea to do some body motion as well. Most people don't want to see just head animation.

Ruud Harbers:

I got a kind of Max headroom flashback here.