Final Rating: 4.14. Finished 105 out of 162 entries.

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Animator: Ivan Elizalde

Description: Even if he wants to, he has to keep it secret. For their own good.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 48 hours

Comments:

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Hugo Composti:

Hey ! Good poses but be careful about the lip sync ! Keep it up !

Vanessa Gonzalez:

I think the overall animation could be a little more exaggerated. Not too much, because I like the tone you were going for, but with a little more movement on the head and a bit more exaggeration on his lips when he pronounces the words this piece could be way stronger. Other than that it's pretty good.

Mike M.:

The lip sync is off.

Beau Hall:

The words are there - but barely. Not a lot of movement at all - blow it all up bigger.

Jasmine Moody:

Nice and subtle facial animation.

Lukasz Wenc:

lipsync is off

Ryan D Lowe:

For a shot this tight, that lip sync has to be spot on. This however needs a lot of work. Your shapes need exaggerated. I like the motion on the head. I feel the sadness.

Aaron Clement:

Nice subtle expressions and acting. Lypc sync is a bit off. Good job on toning this down, though.

Danny Kneip:

The high camera angle is an interesting choice here. The lip sync needs a bit of polishing.