Comments:
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Cortland Miller:
the lipsync on the first character seems to be a bit delayed, and their body motions are over-acted/exaggerated. The second character is well animated, has good lipsync, and the story concept is very interesting.
Ben Zingo:
"5 years" seems quite delayed/behind the audio.
The initial pose also makes sense in hindsight, but it's not immediately clear that she's hiding/is afraid. More turning away, wincing, flinching, or slowly moving away might help convey the idea.
Miming out "5 years" with 5 fingers also seems a little unnecessary
Michael D. Smith:
Expressions and models were solid. Good animation. I would have slowed up and held the moment a little bit more right at the end while she's dropping the chemical. Speed up to poor and slow down to drop it.
Etienne Massot:
Second character animation is great
Jay Whitt:
The roles are switched.
AJM:
nice, a little more push is needed though.
Animator: Bordin Sriwattana
Description: In the middle of the night in school, two students did a science experiment.
Rain rig by Blender Studio
Akali rig by Riot Games / Crabnuts
Experience: 3 Years
Time taken: 7 Days (4 Hours per day after work)