Malena Gonzales:

You're getting some great flow in there, but its a tad hard to visualize with those structure lines!

ronda crom:

Very interesting take. Give this a 7 star respectable ....and I can see you improve from compeption to competition....down the road.

Cortland Miller:

despite how rough it is, I'm pretty proud of this, particularly of the body language on the second character.

Michael D. Smith:

Some pretty effective camera work.

Etienne Massot:

the end is good, But i am not sure about the choise of camera on second shot