Comments:
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Malena Gonzales:
Great acting, transitions and designs!!
Tiffany Lounsbury:
Great characters!
Michael D. Smith:
Great setting and camera motion. The timing and expression is fantastic. The subtle relaxing of the motions just pushes this one over the top.
Etienne Massot:
Love the style, great animation, love the idea
This is gonna be in final to me
AJM:
Lyp-syn is off.
Ben Zingo:
very nice overall! The lipsync seems a little behind at points, not entirely sure if it's the 11Sec playback, or if some snappier easing on the mouth shapes would help.
the book toss at the end is also slightly awkward, it's as if the book were very heavy (the arm movement is fine, maybe just adding in a couple extra frames, or more arc to the book)
I think the eye movement is also maybe a little too quick?
Animator: Sergey Vinogradov
Description: If kids don't like something, adults just need to accept it.
Experience: 10 years
Time taken: week