Comments:
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Dave Roddick:
Choppy movements. No facial animation or lip sync.
Aaron Clement:
This is still in blocking. Guess you ran out of time. A good 1st pass!
Elisabeth Janerka:
Work on your composition and framing. There is also a weird empty space on the screen right while the characters are cramped up in the left upper side of the screen
Animator: Lucia
Description: just one week sorry I dont know how to rnder, sorry its just blocking
Experience: None
Time taken: 1 week