Comments:
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Oliver:
Block out your animation in stepped curves. Start by concentrating on strong poses and timing. Manually key in the in-betweens. Don't let the computer control the rig too much.
Jordan Smith:
Lip-syncing needs improvement. Maybe also take your character out of IK Arm.
Marten Visser:
some weird movent in the blond character.
Tom Islava:
I like it, just don't have the guy move so much. It's kinda distracting
Jessica Cain:
Good camera shots
Animator: Félix Gzz
Description: Didn't put the effort that I would've liked, but I wanted to try this month's competition, Feedback is highly appreciated:)
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 3 days