Geoff Simmonds:

Nice setup but getures a little bit repetitive. Also, the edits didn't seem to flow will together as the character jumps to different poses but there's no matching break in the dialogue that would explain this. But nice natural gestures and facial expressions.

Laura Frost:

A bit flat in the first few seconds, but picks up and his movements are more lively.

Francisco J Ramirez:

very good, i like the hand gun gesture and the two camera angles. maybe play a bit more with the playing dead part.

Imon Branch:

the background is fuzz also the camera action needs work