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Kiefer Paulson:
great poses and timing. my only critique is when the first character is handed the red bag (f 70-85) he doesn't show that it's as heavy as the other guy did (f 30-60). good job otherwise
Nassim Briedj:
the throw at the end awesome!
Matt Herbert:
Nice timing and natural movements to your characters. Your pacing is very good. Good weight to the suitcase too!
Brady Green:
niiiice animation
Dang Duy Quang:
Cool!
Jez:
despite of basic characters constructions this clip is
extremely well done.
interesting camera cuts, lighting & animation goes without saying.
It shows one does not need fancy characters
to show well done animation.
I would think a sponsor of this site , AnimationMentor.com, could love it
&
might use it as an example of a work well done
I've found only one imperfection when he says "HEY, next time" there is a split of a second cut
which disturbs my eye. It is noticeable but I'm sure easily fixed & got there by an editing mistake
Simple but well done
could be the winner.
Aram Lakhotia:
I like the acting.
Justin Jones:
Good animation, but I suggest that you don't show the characters clipping in/out of frame during each scene change.
Siddhartha Ahearne:
Nice work, like the natural feel of it all.
Couple of things that I find could improved it,
The twinning on the arms between frames 18-25, a slight offset to each other would have been nice.
Between frames 125 and 192, he does 2 gestures with the right hand and one with the left hand, I think a head gesture instead of the left hand would have been more natural.
Good Job, congrats!
Alec Durant:
this is really nice!
Animator: Wang Yong
Description: A kind driver helped a traveller who had an accident
Experience: Three years
Time taken: 3 weeks