Kiefer Paulson:

holy mouth movement, Batman! the lip sync is really distracting

Latif Moxon:

The timing between two poses is little bit fast
Work on timing
Nice poses

Eric Raffle:

your lacking the fundamentals, no storyline no plot we have no clue as to why it was a hell of a trip and also your movement was not realistic you had too many stages where it needed motion but it was filled with a blocking pose, try act out your scene on a camera or get reference to get more realism to your scene

Jordan Gross:

The animation for your characters play really fast, other than that everything looks good.