Kiefer Paulson:

too many camera cuts, not enough animation.

Eric Raffle:

lacks flair, they not really doing much in the scene and you need better camera views

Paul Rodriguez:

Batch render should have been used instead of Playblast

Rishi Harshvardhan:

The character standing at the back looks a little stiff. Need to move it a bit more. And work on the expressions, also.

Eugene Johnson:

The video was ok. The part that got me was the model at the door he hardly make any kind of movement at all besides moving his head left and right.