Marlowe:

Beautiful render but the actions don't feel as though they match up with the duologue
overall, rather well done though :)

Justin Miller:

Looks pretty solid. I'd tone down the animation a bit so it's more subtle, and get rid of the camera movements. It's kind of unnecessary.

philipp seis:

Very moody ! The hands are creepy. She should divorce the guy. Or no...that's her lawer right ?

Sean McDonald:

Shadow cuts his body in two at the neck, might look better to have his face only partially covered by shadow.

Dan Raigorodsky Bendahan:

I think the camera shake doesn't help to the story so keep it simple !

Aaron Rivera:

Pretty good! The lip sync could use some touching up and the shakeycam was unnecessary but overall it's solid.

Also, that divorce document is HUGE.

Dario:

good but the movements of the camera are a bit too random

Mahesh Waran:

rather give more time in your animation!

Andrey:

Too much camera movement

Brian Heath:

good idea...the camera was a little jarring though

Lauren Kimball:

I like the set up, but the camera movement is a bit distracting.

Sophie Bracmard:

The camera is moving too much. It's really distracting and there is no use for it. I don't think it's a good idea to put the face of your character like that. We can't really see his expression and lipsync. Careful with the gestures. He's doing a lot of different ones in a very few time, it doesn't look very natural.

Esa Faramarzian:

your lighting is nice but its hiding what this club is all about, your ANIMATION.