#1 06-26-2007 8:59 pm

faffona
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june competition in 2d

hi,
a post you a rough animation for the june competition... of course it's a work in progress, but i'm waiting for your critics and suggestions about my exercise

p.s. i'm sorry for my not so good english!!


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#2 06-26-2007 10:09 pm

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Re: june competition in 2d

Hey... very nice, a 2D one...smile

I think you missed that *gasp* before "a life" from the sound. You're character needs a huge breath taken there.
I love it.... great pice. big_smile

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#3 06-27-2007 3:57 am

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Re: june competition in 2d

Ah....something different smile
ya agree with anymator on the *gasp* part. IMO i feel that the head is moving about a bit too much? I kinda feel dizzy hehe.
Great work though

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#4 06-27-2007 2:29 pm

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Re: june competition in 2d

Haha, awesome!!  This is looking really cool.  Great to see another 2D entry!!  Oh man, is she sitting on a pile of poo?  Haha, this is great.  big_smile 

You've obviously got some great skills here, all I'd say would be to watch out for the silhouette when she says "town", I'm losing her hand when her mouth comes over, and when she does the big gasp, it looks like some frames are missing, she kind of stops for a second instead of doing the gasp.  I'd love to see a big gasp pose that contrasts her hunched-over pose, maybe bring her head way up there. 

This is looking really cool though, I would love to see it cleaned up and final!  Great work!  smile

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#5 06-28-2007 5:33 pm

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Re: june competition in 2d

here the next step of my exercise... unfortunatly in 2d animation is not so make corrections  above all I haven't  many time for this competition!!
I hope to make a better animation next time (maybe in 3d...for my first time!!!)
thanks for your comments and suggestions... I'm waiting for other one...

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#6 06-28-2007 5:39 pm

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Re: june competition in 2d

ops! i have watched only in this time the linkon youtube.... I haven't made a good export...lacks "living" in the audio...sorry!!!!

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