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#1 04-26-2009 9:01 pm
- catgir429

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Short silent film of a true story
I recently read a kids book that made me start to cry. It was one of the best stories I ever read. I have thought about it and I want to make a short animation on it.
It's the story called Hachiko Waits. About a Akita and his loyalty to his master who was a professor at a university. The dog followed his master to the train station everyday and watched as his master went to the university. He always came back on the 3 'o clock train and the dog always was there waiting for his master to return. One day the professor goes to the university and he doesn't cone back. The dog waited loyally for his return, but he never returned. The dog came back everyday to see if his master would return. The stationmaster fed the dog since he felt sorry that the dog couldn't understand his master died. Months and years went by..still the dog waited. Then 10 years had past since the professor had died. Hachi could barely get up he was an old dog now, but he lied in wait for his return. When the train came he pulled himself up to wait..then he collapsed and died. Poor Hachi waited all his life for his master's return.
This story I thought would make a great short story to try and do. I just need to get to work on it. Does it seem too much to do for a short story, or does it seem good enough?
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#2 04-27-2009 12:29 am
Re: Short silent film of a true story
Wow, that's touching. I think it's great short story material. My advice would be not to try and get it done quickly, but let it be an ongoing project that just gets longer and longer. (And better and better!) ![]()
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#3 04-27-2009 3:42 am
- catgir429

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Re: Short silent film of a true story
well thinking of starting out slow on it. Coming up with how it starts and such..I was thinking of doing short sketch clips of parts like he came every day to the train station to wait for his master. That way..people will want to see more parts to it to see what happens next. then at the end I might tie it altogether.
Granted I need to take it slow since I need to refresh myself on doing animation. Also thinking as to how it will end up? (paper/pencil or flash)I dunno if I wanna go back to maya seeing as I had bad experiences with it. I might just sketch out the actions as a rough animation so I get the feel for it.
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#4 04-27-2009 3:53 am
- threedsnack
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Re: Short silent film of a true story
That story has got a ton of potential. You got my vote for hand drawn ![]()
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#5 04-27-2009 4:26 am
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Yea you really picked a great story to animate. I never read the book but I had an idea that you can use if you want.
In the ending when he is old instead of showing him die you can show him finally seeing his master the same age finally coming back to take him and make it so it symbolizes the dog has just died and can now rest in peace with his master.
I don't know just an idea but it would still work fine with the dog dieing which will have a great impact.
Can't wait to see the preproduction work on this!
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#6 04-27-2009 4:42 am
- catgir429

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Re: Short silent film of a true story
you know that might help cause then it really falls into place. I was going to do the story from the dog's perspective a lot. Since the story is about Hachi and his loyalty to his master. Yeah the book actually does talk about him dying and everyone at the station all saddened by his passing. They made a monument to Hachi and placed it where he once stood waiting for the train. I think I might skip the books end cause I am doing it from Hachi's perspective rather than just an overall story.
The other challenge is that there is no dialogue. One of the phrases that the professor kept saying to Hachi was "what a good dog you are.", "what a fine dog you are", and "Hachi you are the best dog in all of Japan." That and the dog barks in a part making the professor concerned and such. I was thinking of doing it like a real silent movie where when they have dialogue it would show it rather than speak the words..but I dunno if that would make it slowed down too much. I want more action rather than speaking in this animation since the original Japanese live action of the story had too much words and it just got too much like a drama. I would rather have t like the book had it. more action than words.
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