#1 06-17-2018 3:16 pm

AlexandraHaynes
Registered: 06-17-2018
Posts: 1
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June WIP

Hi everyone, here is my work in progress for the June competition. I'd really appreciate any advice on this.
They are my own character rigs, and I'll add hair/cloth simulation later on smile

Cheers, Alexandra

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YfO2HOwNUB0

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#2 06-27-2018 11:53 pm

evgoddard
Registered: 09-08-2014
Posts: 8

Re: June WIP

Looks good so far!  I like the chemistry between the 2 characters. One thing to watch out for, the girl's sword is going through the wall behind her. Another thing that feels unfinished is her walk away at the end. It is very apparent that the walk stops before her face stops moving. If i were to be nit picky I would suggest doing something a bit different with the male character's hand, it seems to be kind of doing the same motion the whole time but I think that is just an artistic choice.  I think you have a great piece here, keep up the great work!

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