#1 01-19-2018 5:21 am

Tyson
Registered: 06-10-2016
Posts: 10

January WIP, comments welcome

I'm in the middle of doing tweaks, timings, general polish. what do you guys think?

https://youtu.be/BcqAy9hV7QY

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#2 01-19-2018 8:03 am

AmJam
From: California, USA
Registered: 01-06-2018
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Re: January WIP, comments welcome

I like where you're going with the expressions! The character's body feels indecisively wiggly, but I'm not certain if it was a camera move that I'm attributing that to. Composition-wise, I suspect the letterbox framing is a bit too low and shouldn't be so close to the character's head. Just a tad more breathing room could be fitting.

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#3 01-19-2018 2:40 pm

Tyson
Registered: 06-10-2016
Posts: 10

Re: January WIP, comments welcome

Thanks for the reply!
There's no camera movement so it's certainly the body. I tried to copy my own movement in a reference video I made for it but I'm still working on reducing wiggle in my animations, I'm not too good at animating being still.
I put the camera up close because I wanted to make them feel like they're towering over you and imposing. You're right though, I didn't notice that the head is actually touching it at points, thanks.

Last edited by Tyson (01-19-2018 2:43 pm)

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#4 01-22-2018 1:48 pm

ezromation
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Re: January WIP, comments welcome

The bit where she says Date has good intensity.

I think you need to pick another pose in the dialogue with this amount of focus and where the character is looking at who she is talking to.

"please" or "planet" look like good points to do this focusing on the character she is talking to.

Looks like it will be a good one.

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