#1 11-06-2017 10:47 pm

Larst
Registered: 07-10-2017
Posts: 5

AppStore Acting

hello everyone
please i need you opinon on this animation


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#2 11-07-2017 3:12 pm

BPK3hunder
Registered: 10-30-2017
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Re: AppStore Acting

Very nice acting! I like the body language of both characters, and the blue guy's lip-syncing looks very accurate. The green guy's lip-syncing could use some work, particularly at the 7th second where his mouth opens a little too wide when saying "that", and it seems to have trouble keeping up with "four-dollar mocha".

Other than that, not much to say. Pretty good!

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#3 11-07-2017 10:00 pm

thrawnthebaneful
Registered: 05-07-2016
Posts: 6

Re: AppStore Acting

The blue character when he says crazy feels wayyyy to big and your missing the "R" shape in there also. Likewise your also missing the R shape when the blue guy says "pricing" in his first sentence. I would step back and back sure you hitting those shapes and that should really push this even more. Looking good, Keep up the great work!

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