#1 10-16-2017 6:51 pm

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WIP Playblast animation - "At the bus stop

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This is a work-in-progress play blast video of two boys siting at the bus stop at nighttime in the cold.


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#2 11-03-2017 1:23 pm

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Re: WIP Playblast animation - "At the bus stop

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Sorry that it took along time but, this is an update work-in-progress playblast video.  I decaded to have the second character holding a tablet like if he's reading something.


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#3 11-03-2017 1:48 pm

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Re: WIP Playblast animation - "At the bus stop

Moving this to personal animation.


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#4 11-06-2017 6:39 pm

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Re: WIP Playblast animation - "At the bus stop

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This is a new update on the work-in-progress play blast.  I have to change the look on character 1 face.  I felt that his face looks pretty awkward at some point.  I did some more tweaking to the spacing on both characters. Any comments?


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#5 11-07-2017 8:40 am

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Re: WIP Playblast animation - "At the bus stop

I'd say the thing that jumped out of me was the stretch on the left guy's head. You can usually only get away with a squishy smear like that on a really fast action and here you hold it for several frames. Either tone down the squish or speed up the reaction, to be more like his last reaction (which works fine because it's much faster).

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#6 11-09-2017 6:26 pm

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This is a new update on the play blast animation scene.  I did some more tweaks the characters and I start adding textures to the BG. On the next update I will add a logo to the glass just to indicate that these two boys is sitting at the bus stop.  Any comments?


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#7 11-10-2017 4:59 pm

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Re: WIP Playblast animation - "At the bus stop

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This is the latest update on the work-in-progress play blast animation video.  I've added textures to the glass of the bus stop. This is just to indicate that the scene take place at a bus stop in New York City. I've also worked on the eye movements on both characters and tweak the animation some more. Any comments?


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