#1 10-31-2017 9:45 am

sethulakshmi
Registered: 10-31-2017
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WIP "FEAR"

Yet to complete.My first attempt on 3D animation.Please don't hesitate to comment.

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#2 10-31-2017 11:48 am

ten_thousand_hours
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Re: WIP "FEAR"

Hi sethulakshmi,

Well done on your first attempt at 3D. How are you finding it? The first thing i would suggest would be to change to stepped mode. this will allow us to more clearly see your poses and get a better sense of where you intend to go with the shot and timing. I would remove the movement on the cameras as it is distracting. I think you have some nice facial poses that really convey how she is feeling but i think your body poses need to be a bit clearer. Think about how you can make each key poses clearer and stronger. Think about how they would look as a silhouette. Do they make sense even then? For now don't focus on the movement but the poses. I think you have a good idea here and nice start

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#3 10-31-2017 5:03 pm

abhijithshankar
Registered: 10-23-2017
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Re: WIP "FEAR"

nice start (Y) keep going

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#4 11-02-2017 5:09 pm

sethulakshmi
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Re: WIP "FEAR"

ten_thousand_hours wrote:

Hi sethulakshmi,

Well done on your first attempt at 3D. How are you finding it? The first thing i would suggest would be to change to stepped mode. this will allow us to more clearly see your poses and get a better sense of where you intend to go with the shot and timing. I would remove the movement on the cameras as it is distracting. I think you have some nice facial poses that really convey how she is feeling but i think your body poses need to be a bit clearer. Think about how you can make each key poses clearer and stronger. Think about how they would look as a silhouette. Do they make sense even then? For now don't focus on the movement but the poses. I think you have a good idea here and nice start

Thanks for your valuable comment.I will try my level best to improve my work. smile

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