#1 10-24-2017 9:13 pm

pavlushka
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WIP "The operation under threat.." October.

Hey guys! Look at my blocking pass please.. Your comments are welcome and will be very helpfull...

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#2 10-25-2017 1:24 am

xamandamarie22
Registered: 05-18-2015
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Re: WIP "The operation under threat.." October.

This looks really nice so far!! my only suggestion would be to have the monster do something more than just sort of stand there after he knocks down the door. maybe look under a couple boxes or something? it needs to be a bit more clear that he's threatening.. just my 2 cents!

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#3 10-25-2017 7:49 am

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Registered: 02-04-2013
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Re: WIP "The operation under threat.." October.

Looks good! Her right wrist looks a tad too twisted on the pose when she's holding onto the wall though, maybe have it more flat on the front of the wall like the left one?

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#4 10-26-2017 10:20 pm

pavlushka
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Re: WIP "The operation under threat.." October.

Thanks guys! Here is the update...    https://youtu.be/kNwyhrze77Y

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