#1 10-13-2017 1:36 pm

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Loud TV Speakers - Work-in-Progress

This is a work-in-progress play blast video of Malcolm reacting to loud TV speakers after he falls asleep.  Later, he turns the TV off and falls back asleep.  Any critique please?

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#2 10-13-2017 2:37 pm

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Re: Loud TV Speakers - Work-in-Progress

the poses looks really good to me.. for now i think its going very good smile

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#3 10-16-2017 2:54 pm

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This is an update WIP playblast video for this competition.  I've made some changes some of these poses.  I wanted his reaction to happen quickly after hearing explosion sounds coming from his speakers.  Can someone give me any suggestions on his arm movement during his reaction as he jumps out off his seat?


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#4 10-18-2017 1:19 am

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Re: Loud TV Speakers - Work-in-Progress

Hi, good ideia, realy cool, try to put the character less straight, maybe one leg for out, swinging, make the breath fade, take a look at the follow through of spline. I think that it will be make your shot better. Keep rock!

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#5 10-20-2017 3:30 pm

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Good start! i would have a look at the arcs on the arms when he wakes up. Did you shoot some reference for that bit? Also the breathing is okay (i like the idea) but i think there's a lot of movement on one or two controllers and none on the others making it seem very stiff and un-natural. His neck and shoulders don't seem to be moving almost like they are stuck. Good Luck

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#6 10-20-2017 8:07 pm

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This is a new update work-in-progress play blast 3D animation for this month 11 second club competition.  I made the chair rock once after he lands back on it just to make it more believable in this scene.


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#7 10-21-2017 6:05 pm

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This is a new update on the work-in-progress play blast video.  I did some more tweaks in the animation and update the background and props.


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#8 10-22-2017 9:52 pm

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This is the latest update on the animation work-in-progress play blast video.  Basically, I did some more tweaks to the animation and I also work a little bit more on the facial expression.


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#9 10-24-2017 5:50 pm

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Re: Loud TV Speakers - Work-in-Progress

He seems to lift the cup up to his mouth a bit too fast at the start. looking good otherwise

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