#1 10-17-2017 7:21 pm

isobare
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Bullies

hello everyone please any critique are welcome

Links :  https://youtu.be/pJICgWKY2CY

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#2 10-18-2017 4:38 am

Slothsin
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Re: Bullies

expression is good.. but i feel that the hand comes under the face pretty fast.. it looks a bit odd and maybe you could do something with the shoulder too.. it looks too fixed .. else its going good smile

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#3 10-19-2017 6:54 pm

isobare
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Re: Bullies

ok thanks for feedback i'll do the update of the shot

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#4 10-20-2017 11:24 am

isobare
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Re: Bullies

update version of Shot


Link : https://youtu.be/xS0KL7zSSKw

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#5 10-20-2017 11:32 am

Slothsin
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Re: Bullies

It looks very good now smile i hope some other more experienced animators watch it and give a feedback.. big_smile

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#6 10-20-2017 3:43 pm

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Re: Bullies

I think this is pretty good. The thing that caught my eye is that right hand coming up to the face. Its very linear is speed and movement. it almost draws a perfect straight line up the screen. I would also maybe tilt him to the right a little while the hand is coming up and then coming back over to settle on the hand. He would naturally shift to the other side slightly so the other arm could take his weight. Also the curve of the stripes on his top makes it look like something strange is happening to his rig cage shape? Good work so far though!

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