#1 10-04-2017 2:17 am

MIKENTNZ
Registered: 02-10-2017
Posts: 12

Could use some feedback

This is a work in progress of an animation I'm currently working on. Nothing too fancy, but it's practice. As always any feedback is welcomed.


https://youtu.be/Rj05hwt-X0c

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#2 10-04-2017 3:37 am

Krios
Registered: 09-02-2017
Posts: 22
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Re: Could use some feedback

Cool move... but that first step he takes before he spins seems to pause too long.
Was that meant for him to build up momentum?  If so, try to exaggerate that bit.   
Otherwise, it looks real good.

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#3 10-04-2017 5:03 am

Slothsin
From: New Delhi, India
Registered: 02-08-2017
Posts: 81
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Re: Could use some feedback

it looks great.. but even i think the the anticipation part where he prepares for the jump is a bit odd.. i wish i could help you  more .. else it looks great! smile

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