#1 07-11-2017 6:28 am

Slothsin
From: New Delhi, India
Registered: 02-08-2017
Posts: 81
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happy walk cycle

tried to make a happy walk cycle.. would like to know if i need to change anything and is this fine enough to keep in my portfolio..?? hmm

https://vimeo.com/225053097

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#2 07-25-2017 7:26 am

NAbreu
From: San Francisco
Registered: 03-15-2012
Posts: 114

Re: happy walk cycle

Hey Slothsin,

The walk can use a bit of work yet i think. Very big, exaggerated motion which i think is great. But you need to tone down the head (keep in more fixed looking forward, you don't really swing your head around very much at all when you walk. you'd get too dizzy).

The arms need some work too. You're bending the wrist too much in some areas. Makes it look broken. Also, it looks like you have too many keys on the arms. Try to remove some keys so the motion is smooth and not hitching. For a swinging motion like this its important to use as few keys as you can to get the motion. You should only need 3 or so to describe that arm action (two extremes and the in between).

Hope that helps.
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#3 09-25-2017 4:18 pm

Slothsin
From: New Delhi, India
Registered: 02-08-2017
Posts: 81
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Re: happy walk cycle

it took me a while to come back and see your review but thanks a lot for the suggestions.. i will try to make it better.. thanks a lot smile

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