#1 09-08-2017 2:46 pm

Infernoflower
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September 11 Second Club WIP

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Hi, here's my blocking pass for this month's 11 Second Club competition. What do you all think of it so far?

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#2 09-11-2017 10:01 am

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Re: September 11 Second Club WIP

hi good start, but i think your poses are not as strong as they could be. Did you take some video reference? The guy on the left has some very strange poses (holding his chest, very bent kneees?) I don't think this is very readable. Also there is a lot of twinning on both characters that could be broken up. I think if you have some reference, try to capture the poses from that to make what everyone is doing/ thinking really clear. Good Luck

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#3 09-16-2017 8:19 am

Infernoflower
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Re: September 11 Second Club WIP

Hello, I did take some video reference. Also, what do you mean by twinning?

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#4 09-17-2017 4:32 am

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Re: September 11 Second Club WIP

Watch the symmetry with the arms.  They should not look the same on both sides.

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#5 09-18-2017 9:26 am

ten_thousand_hours
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Re: September 11 Second Club WIP

Infernoflower wrote:

Hello, I did take some video reference. Also, what do you mean by twinning?

Twinning means that both sides of the body are mirrored. Usually in the arms and hands but it can also happen in the legs. So currently you have both arms and legs doing the exact same thing at the exact same time. We call that twinning. Here's an article with video about it
http://www.animatorisland.com/defining- … -twinning/

Good Luck!

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#6 09-18-2017 3:10 pm

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Re: September 11 Second Club WIP

Inferno when you have a chance add me on hangouts carlosguadarr@gmail.com or my skype (zethicus).

Cheers!


-Zeth

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#7 09-25-2017 4:16 pm

Infernoflower
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Re: September 11 Second Club WIP

https://youtu.be/-mqNluLxidc

Here's a version with lipsync and blinking and also some fixed poses. What do you all think of it?

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