#1 09-21-2017 7:58 am

bbymyrkatt
Registered: 08-04-2017
Posts: 2

Need some feedback, hit a wall!

Need some critique on my WIP. Been staring at it for too long and always struggle on when to call it finished! D:

               

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Thanks, all!!!

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#2 09-21-2017 8:45 am

snuffymcsnuff
Registered: 02-04-2013
Posts: 93

Re: Need some feedback, hit a wall!

Could you upload it to sync sketch maybe? Then it'd be easier to point out the problem areas. Off the top of my head I'd say the feet seem to lock in place on some frames during his struggle to fly, which makes it look and feel pretty choppy. And I dunno about the restrictions of the rig, but some squash and stretch when he hits the ground would be nice. And this might be a matter of opinion, but I feel that his face falls into sadness/defeat too soon when he falls. Maybe have his eyes open a couple more frames and then close them?

The last pose is incredibly charming though! It's a sweet little shot on the whole smile

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#3 09-23-2017 5:54 am

bbymyrkatt
Registered: 08-04-2017
Posts: 2

Re: Need some feedback, hit a wall!

Thank you so much!! Really appreciate the feedback. I'm trying to implement changes as I type.

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