#1 09-18-2017 2:37 pm

christian
Registered: 09-26-2011
Posts: 3

September Animation

Hello Everyone, my first 3d animation for the eleven second club.
Here is my Blocking, please give me your feedback big_smile

https://vimeo.com/234329179

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#2 09-19-2017 7:51 am

davini
From: Madrid
Registered: 06-13-2013
Posts: 75

Re: September Animation

Is really good, I miss the oooonnnn in the part of vacation. (about frame 123)

Last edited by davini (09-19-2017 7:54 am)

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#3 09-19-2017 11:17 am

christian
Registered: 09-26-2011
Posts: 3

Re: September Animation

davini wrote:

Is really good, I miss the oooonnnn in the part of vacation. (about frame 123)

thanks Man! I will improve that big_smile

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#4 09-19-2017 3:56 pm

dmos83
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Re: September Animation

It's a good start so far. I think you've got some good storytelling poses. I did a couple draw overs on some poses that I think will help improve the emotional performance. I think the main thing is that the expressions could be pushed on these poses. Keep it up! smile

http://s448.photobucket.com/user/deanmosier/media/Draw%20Over%201_zpsw6fljqxv.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0
http://s448.photobucket.com/user/deanmosier/media/Draw%20Over%202_zpsmxjjbwyq.jpg.html?sort=3&o=1

Last edited by dmos83 (09-19-2017 4:31 pm)

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#5 09-19-2017 4:24 pm

christian
Registered: 09-26-2011
Posts: 3

Re: September Animation

dmos83 wrote:

It's a good start so far. I think you've got some good storytelling poses. I did a couple draw overs on some poses that I think will help improve the emotional performance. I think the main thing is that the expressions could be pushed on these poses. Keep it up!

https://s448.photobucket.com/user/deanm … =3&o=0

https://s448.photobucket.com/user/deanm … jjbwyq.jpg

Thank you so much!! Iwill improve this expressions

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#6 09-19-2017 4:32 pm

dmos83
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Re: September Animation

Sorry if you're having trouble viewing the images.  I've tried several things but I can't seem to get them both to show.  It looks like one of the links you have is working though so hopefully you can click to the second one from that link.

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