#1 09-06-2017 3:52 pm

zethicus
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Feedback on my recent submissions please!

Hello!

I wanted to know if you guys could give me feedback on my latest submissions to the contest, so I can make them better for my demo reel.

Here's a link to the first one:

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https://syncsketch.com/playground/d9538 … 8e9#230839

And here's a link to the second one:

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https://syncsketch.com/playground/7111b … a56#230842

Thanks a lot!


-Zeth

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#2 09-11-2017 4:36 pm

ten_thousand_hours
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Re: Feedback on my recent submissions please!

these are really nice. The guy in the shower is really good but the timing is all very even, the same beat all the way through. There's a couple of moments where i think the timing could of been pushed to give some more contrast. This is something i struggle with a lot so i'm trying to add it to my own work. This video explain better than me (skip to 6mins 30)
http://www.animatorisland.com/?s=timing

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#3 09-11-2017 4:38 pm

ten_thousand_hours
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Re: Feedback on my recent submissions please!

Also just want to say i really like your shower anim this month. I remembered it in voting. the subtle bouncing to the music, really nice touch.

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#4 09-11-2017 4:40 pm

zethicus
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From: Mexico
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Re: Feedback on my recent submissions please!

Thanks! I'll look into it!


-Zeth

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