#1 09-05-2017 2:45 am

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September 2017 in progress

I guess at this point I want to make sure my intent is clear...I'm trying a different animation workflow too ...so far so good....any feedback is welcome

https://syncsketch.com/playground/a2b62 … 9e7#229997


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#2 09-05-2017 10:31 am

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Re: September 2017 in progress

I think the setup is pretty clear and your poses work really well overall. I'm unsure about the boy's last pose though, it seems a little too aggressive for that line, maybe a little less forceful and a little more sly would fit it better?

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#3 09-05-2017 12:10 pm

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Re: September 2017 in progress

hey thanks for taking a look for me.  I'll check into and see if I can tone that down...I'm notoriously bad about blowing things away so I could very well just delete it all and try a different ending....well delete the ending anyways lol. Thanks again!


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#4 09-05-2017 7:11 pm

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Re: September 2017 in progress

I think your timing is a little off. your poses seem a tiny tiny bit late compared with the dialogue. Perhaps also there are a few too many head gestures in there? Also I would strongly recommend (at this stage) showing your work in stepped keys.

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#5 09-08-2017 9:46 pm

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Re: September 2017 in progress

hopefully I've made some improvements in here on this one..  I haven't really addressed the dialogue so I haven't gotten to those notes..still attempting to tackle this way of working so lemme know what you guys think
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/181199#232303


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#6 09-11-2017 9:37 am

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Re: September 2017 in progress

good progress! Watch the right hand at around frame 21, its too hard. looks like hes hitting an invisible wall. Also i don't think the tiger should look at the camera. Is he supposed to be thinking at that point? If so i would have his eyes down and to the left instead. The tigers subtle animation is looking really nice. His ear twitch and hanging paw are lovely.

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