Good idea, loving the concept!

i love that it feels like it's a musical!
super cool staging!

I LOVE the first part

man it'd be best if you upload it to syncsketch for reviews, because I think its at the point that the word feedback needs drawing on top to aid your process

Vincent81 wrote:

Show the frames number so it's better help you
At second 2 and 3 you hold right arm at the some pose for too long time
At second 6 the movment of left arm it's too fast

thank you  I will add frame number.

I feel that your acting in this scene is working, I just feel like the character is just FLYING through a few of the poses, especially in the grave yard. I'd say to pick a couple of the poses in the grave yard, and really hold those 1 or 2. I'd lose the arm extended standing pose, and pull back the arm extended pose on his knees, and really focus on him holding a few of the other poses for a few more frames. Maybe when he's on his knees, pull his arms into his sides, like he's really feeling the weight of what he's done, and he can't even lift his arms up.